Hi Ray,

I think I listened to the medium version (6:30), Parkattack it is called.
I liked the cello very much, but also how the song is developing during this time.
As others say I expected you to start singing at about every minute, but you kept silent.
So I didn't have to tell you to crank up the volume of the vocals.
For me these 6:30 minutes are fine. Not too long, but that is mainly because I love the cello.
I ofte use it/them in my songs, like the violins or fiddles.
If it were youre vocals... (no, just a silly joke).
But about the fiddles: maybe you could enter them in this 'dark' song as well. They can bring in a spurprising angle?

A very nice song, Ray. Loved it!
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130