Hi Dan
Such a wonderful song
And who could sing it better than you ?
The only thing you should try is this :
Take a drum kit with a really fat snare sound and add some reverb. Mix the drums as loud as you can justify it into the song ;-)
And I think the message and your singing will get even more expressiveness.
At least that's my experience ;-)))
Well done
Many greetings
Andi ;-)