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Thanks to Floyd for offering his advice regarding texture to the production on this one! Not sure if I improved or not but I essentially turned the last chorus into a breakdown chorus. Let me know what you think if you are so inclined. Constructive feedback ALWAYS welcomed!! Na zdrowie! SHE KNOWS HOW TO BREAK UP (Revised) BIAB info is in the original post for this song.
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Dewey,
That little bit of change is quite nice.
Opinion - I think this could benefit from more of this (or similar).
IF you chose to revisit it...
The snare all the way through is part of what drives the feel - the chorus does not have much of a change from the verse (production sound-wise). A sidestick in the first verse would give you a bit of change.
Just ideas.
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Dewey,
Very good vocals & phrasing. I liked tune's structure, especially twist at around 2:00. Clear mix. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.
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Dewey,
That little bit of change is quite nice.
Opinion - I think this could benefit from more of this (or similar).
IF you chose to revisit it...
The snare all the way through is part of what drives the feel - the chorus does not have much of a change from the verse (production sound-wise). A sidestick in the first verse would give you a bit of change.
Just ideas. I like your ear, Floyd! I'll continue to mess with it per your suggestions. Na zdrowie!
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Stolat for taking the suggestion and trying it.
Cheers
rayc
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It's hard to go wrong with a fj suggestion. The man is steeped in N'ville writing and production knowledge.
Well sung with attitude and "The knife she used to cut me loose went pretty deep" is an excellent line.
Enjoyed it!
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Hi Dewey
Sounds really good
Great sung and played
The chorus is top notch
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
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I like what you did here, good song with good vocals, and of course I love those harmonies.
I agree with Floyd, a change of drums from verse to chorus would create a nice contrast, I almost always do that.
If you decide to use a Sidestick, SkaSlow70sWesPerc is always a good choice, at least for the kind of music I write.
Maybe it works for you, too.
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Dewey,
Very good vocals & phrasing. I liked tune's structure, especially twist at around 2:00. Clear mix. Thank you for sharing.
Misha. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, Misha! Stolat for taking the suggestion and trying it.
I'm here to learn from you folks, Ray! Thanks for the encouragement. It's hard to go wrong with a fj suggestion. The man is steeped in N'ville writing and production knowledge.
Well sung with attitude and "The knife she used to cut me loose went pretty deep" is an excellent line.
Enjoyed it!
J&B That's my favorite line, too, Janice and Bud! Thanks for listening! Hi Dewey
Sounds really good
Great sung and played
The chorus is top notch
Many greetings
Andi ;-) Always encouraging, Andi, thank you! I like what you did here, good song with good vocals, and of course I love those harmonies.
I agree with Floyd, a change of drums from verse to chorus would create a nice contrast, I almost always do that.
If you decide to use a Sidestick, SkaSlow70sWesPerc is always a good choice, at least for the kind of music I write.
Maybe it works for you, too. Thanks for the advice B. D.! My BIAB is down right now but I will for sure give your "sidestick" suggestion a try when I'm up and running again! Na zdrowie!
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Great song, and I love the mix. The instrumentation is well done, and the backup harmony is good too!!
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Sounds good but with the sidestick I think that will take it over the top.
BUT this is really good as is!
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Nice write! Everything else, too.  I didn't listen to the first version, so I can't make an comments on how this is different. I am fan of making the verse and chorus sound different on songs, and floyd jane's advice is always worth listening to.
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This is the next revision of this one. Based on all your input, I made the bridge and breakdown chorus more dynamic. I think it's an improvement but let me know what you think. https://soundcloud.com/dewey-longuski/she-knows-how-to-breakup
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