Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Dewey,
Very good vocals & phrasing. I liked tune's structure, especially twist at around 2:00. Clear mix. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.


Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, Misha!

Originally Posted By: rayc
Stolat for taking the suggestion and trying it.


I'm here to learn from you folks, Ray! Thanks for the encouragement.

Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
It's hard to go wrong with a fj suggestion. The man is steeped in N'ville writing and production knowledge.

Well sung with attitude and "The knife she used to cut me loose went pretty deep" is an excellent line.

Enjoyed it!

J&B


That's my favorite line, too, Janice and Bud! Thanks for listening!

Originally Posted By: PROJECT M
Hi Dewey
Sounds really good
Great sung and played
The chorus is top notch
Many greetings
Andi ;-)


Always encouraging, Andi, thank you!

Originally Posted By: B.D.Thomas
I like what you did here, good song with good vocals, and of course I love those harmonies.
I agree with Floyd, a change of drums from verse to chorus would create a nice contrast, I almost always do that.

If you decide to use a Sidestick, SkaSlow70sWesPerc is always a good choice, at least for the kind of music I write.
Maybe it works for you, too.


Thanks for the advice B. D.! My BIAB is down right now but I will for sure give your "sidestick" suggestion a try when I'm up and running again! Na zdrowie!

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