Originally Posted By: rayc
Vocal is ace Marty...expressive and on point.
The understated bass works a treat..
My 1st impression was that the "pad" sound was unnecessary BUT I've not heard it without it & I know you'd've made the right call.

Thanks for your confidence, Ray, AND your comment. You know how I value your honest opinion.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
Excellent vocal and lyrics!
Super groove.
Loved that backing band - brilliant!


Loved the song.

Thanks, Mario. I'd love to hear how you would musically interpret this story.

Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Ha ha ha!

Perfect!

Now THAT is a movie I would buy a ticket for!!!


smile


Sold. You know you get a free bridge in NYC with every purchase.

Originally Posted By: firesong
Marty...well Mr. Versatility you produced another diverse and interesting tune...great production...this is not your normal fare but once again you've shown us how eclectic your mind is when it comes to writing and composition...great storytelling (though a little sad) but you warned us upfront...for my two-cents worth...I would love to hear some mandolins in the background of the solo guitar stuff or some cello to darken it even more...I'll throw those in when I cover this tune on my upcoming Celtic (Seltic/Keltic??) album...as usual I love the video!!

Oh, man, Dan. That would be a dream come true to have you cover this. Ever since I started with BiaB 20 some years ago, I made these tracks in the hopes that I could actually hear a good singer sing them. I thought about you and strings when making this, but thought it would be too much. A sad cello would be perfect though.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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