Originally Posted By: rsdean
Marty,

What a great sound! Love the song and your vocal is outstanding. Mix is excellent.

Dave's guitar really drives the arrangement. And your bass sounds great.

I really enjoyed this.

Bob

Thank you very much, Bob. Most encouraging.

Originally Posted By: firesong
Marty...some people write what they've been through but others have the ability to imagine what others have been through...these are empathetic people who can create the feelings and conjure the situations and relate them accurately in books and poems and films and songs...pretty sure you're one of the latter...another super produced and sounding song...as soon as it starts and I hear Dave's guitar I know some good stuff is following...I love the concept...your use of words and phrases in your titles and hooks is unique...I really like play on words and do it so well...super vocal...fits your tone and range very well....keep up the good work!!

PS...I always love the videos!

Thank you, Dan. So very kind. Empathy is natural and nurtured through self-forgiveness, I feel. Besides, if I only wrote from personal experience it would bore even me. Much more to say about words and puns, but that should be on a separate forum. wink

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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