This is a very modern-sounding song. It is in a style that would likely have a pretty wide appeal among younger people.

I enjoyed listening. It is certainly different from songs that are normally posted here. That is a good thing.

I will leave the technical comments to others. I will say that for me, a song either sounds interesting or it does not. I like this song the way it is. Could further technical changes embellish the song? Perhaps, but I don't think those changes would change much for me.

Thanks for being kind to people from Ukraine. They are living through hell. I have had to privilege of being of some assistance.

Thanks for sharing.

Billy

“Amazing! I’ll be working with Jaco Pastorius, Charlie Parker, Art Tatum, and Buddy Rich, and you’re telling me it’s not that great of a gig?
“Well…” Saint Peter, hesitated, “God’s got this girlfriend who thinks she can sing…”