This is a very modern-sounding song. It is in a style that would likely have a pretty wide appeal among younger people.

I enjoyed listening. It is certainly different from songs that are normally posted here. That is a good thing.

I will leave the technical comments to others. I will say that for me, a song either sounds interesting or it does not. I like this song the way it is. Could further technical changes embellish the song? Perhaps, but I don't think those changes would change much for me.

Thanks for being kind to people from Ukraine. They are living through hell. I have had to privilege of being of some assistance.

Thanks for sharing.

Billy