Wonderful lyrics, beautiful imagery.
I don't think this song needs such a full production. I appreciate what you did with it, but I feel your backing tracks diminished the essence and beauty of the poetry.

The power of your lyrics and melody with a simple supporting guitar with perhaps a small string quartet backing track would work beautifully.

Either way it's wonderful.


Elliott Kayne
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