Hi Torrey ...

I like it a lot. The b/g vocals are sweet. Loved that part at 2:03 - that sweeping-panned phase on the guitar was really cool! Nice arrangement. You are very innovative and have that knack for the little things that bring great dimension to a song.

As far as things I noted you might choose to consider on your tweaks:

1. Perhaps a little less high-end EQ on the vocal
2. Bring the bass a little more forward. It's my opinion that swing songs have a better drive and fuller dynamics when
pushed by a strong bass
3. Maybe more punch on the kick drum. BIAB's indigenous 5-band EQ plug is really good for that effort

Just my thoughts about those things. Feel free to ignore if they don't fit in with your vision for the song.

Can't wait to hear the final "tweaked" version!

Best to you ...

Alan


PS: Many thanks for your kind words on "Complete Surrender".

Last edited by Al-David; 07/08/23 07:20 PM.

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