Hi Torrey
Glad to hear you are feeling better and better !

This is already a great song.
But since you asked us for the opinion, there are two points that I would definitely change:

1. the drums, that sounds way too electronic. There must be a cool, fat drum sound. And that must not be mixed as quietly as the current.
2. the rhythm guitar must be mixed louder in any case.

I wouldn't change the intro at all, because it's top.
The ending is also cool.

Maybe you can do something with the suggestions.
Have fun with the completion of this great song

Many greetings
Andi ;-)