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Blue Skies

blue skies
where are my blue skies?
where did they hide?
i'm so alone
since you've been gone
waiting for blue skies
my blue sky
you're my sun shining in
bring your love back again

   though we wanted a happy ending
   maybe it's time to say our goodbyes
  but my heart refused to listen
  and my tears won't dry

blue skies
you are my blue skies
why did you go?
i'm so alone
since you've been gone
taking my blue sky
my blue sky
bring this night to an end
bring your love back again

   there's still time for a happy ending
   please don't say it's our last goodbye (goodbye)
   'cause my heart won't ever listen
   and my tears won't ever dry

where are my blue skies?

The Backstory (Feel free to skip)

UJAM had just put out a new drumkit called "Cozy" for Lofi Hip Hop Beats, and I decided to put together a test song to see if I could use it. The answer was no, because I like drumkits to sound like drums.

For my test, I had been using the _SJAZZC1 demo song, and that sounded pretty cool. But it had a few too many funky chords for my delicate ears - Bud knows what a baby I am about that - but some editing took care of that.

I then exported the backing track to SynthV and put together a melody. Miracle of miracles, I actually got an idea for the lyric as I was working out the melody:

   blue skies/where are my blue skies

OK, It wasn't much of a lyric. But I'll take what I can get. At 75 bpm, there weren't a whole lot of lyrics to fill in. The second verse is a slight rewrite of the first verse, which seemed to work well enough.

Whenever lyrics don't take a ton of work, I figure that I'm probably accidentally re-writing something I've heard in a different song. So apologies if you recognize these lyrics as derivative of something you wrote.

I recently picked up the Jun voicebank for SynthesizerV, and I liked his lower register and figured that he'd pair nicely with Natalie. He's supposed to pair with Anri, but I tried that voicebank out, and... bleah.

There was some logic to whether or not the lyric said "skies" vs. "sky", but looking at it now, I don't see any particular rhyme of reason. There's a lot of repetition, which isn't necessarily bad, but I should probably put more effort into it.

With no clue what the chorus should say, I left the la la dummy lyrics in place and worked out the harmony, because for me that's the fun part of songwriting.

As nice as Jun's voice is in the lower register, it needed a bit more oomph. I probably should have gone back and picked a key he was stronger in, but that would be too much work. Besides, I sort of liked that register.

I ended up doubling him lightly with himself, and that seemed to work out.

Once that was done, I took another crack at the chorus, and... well, nothing.

So I started mixing the song - which is something I generally try to leave for last. That way, it forces me to complete the lyrics before moving on. But rules are made to be broken, right?

It needed something to give it a bit of variety, so I added a fingerpicked guitar which did the trick. Adding a strummed guitar on the chorus - which was still a bunch of "la las" - filled out the mix. I rendered some tracks of held chords as well.

That left the chorus, and I wasn't making any progress on that. So I typed some key words into the RhymeZone thesaurus in hopes for some sort of inspiration. No luck.

Excluding ChatGPT, that left no option other than typing things out until I came up with something that said what I thought the bridge should say.

I had though about adding a sax solo or something, but it didn't really seem like that was needed. So I put a tag on the end and figured I'd call it done.

Natalie tends to tail off instead of fully holding her notes for the duration. That led to some weird sounding bits where suddenly she would fade out leaving Jun singing by himself. So I went back and extended some of the notes, cut them to the right length, and added a fade so she'd hold the notes longer. I also notices she was singing "tears" wrong, so...

Usually I'll obsess about the mix for days, but I figured I'd try to crank this out and not worry about it too much. There are likely a bunch of little places where I could work out the vocal balance, and I'll probably eventually do that.

I'll probably tweak the lyrics, too... Heck, I literally just changed a line as I was typing this out.

Feel free to comment or whatever!


The Instruments
Lead Vocal: Synthesizer V - Jun
Backing Vocal: Synthesizer V - Jun
Harmony Vocal: Synthesizer V - Natalie
Bass: Electric, SmoothCool Sw16 075 (~902)
Electric Piano: Electric, Rhythm SmoothCool Sw16 075 (~904)
Electric Piano: Rhythm SmoothCool Sw16 075 (~904)
Electric Guitar: Rhythm Pop16thsArp Ev16 085 (1762)
Acoustic Guitar: Rhythm GroovinFolk Sw16 085 (2547)
Drums: SmoothJazzCoolSw16^1-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride

The Effects
Main Buss: HoRNet ThirtyOneMK2, Sunset Sound Studio Reverb (Live Room, Studio 2), Lurssen Mastering Console (Pop Rock)
Lead Vocal: Greg Wells VoiceCentric (Natural Vocal), Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Doubled Lead Vocal: Greg Wells VoiceCentric (Backing Vocals), Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Harmony Vocals: Greg Wells VoiceCentric (Backing Vocals), Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Picked Guitar: Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Rhythm Guitar: TrackSpacer (driven by Lead Vocal), Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Bass: Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Piano Buss: TrackSpacer (driven by Lead Vocal), Panagement 2 (Heaven)
Drums: TrackSpacer (driven by Lead Vocal), Panagement 2 (Concert)