Steve,
nice song... and I especially like the testimony of faith that goes with it.

The one part of the song that sounds like it needs a change to me is the beginning where strings start the song. The chords change too abruptly. Real strings would "ease into" the chord changes. You might accomplish the same effect by:

1) using continuous controllers or another technique to swell the volume, or
2) adding reverb to what you've already got, or
3) using a different string patch that has a softer, slower volume transition, or
4) all of the above

But, as is true of all the comments here, that's more a reflection of my personal preference than it is a commentary on your song.

Last edited by Pat Marr; 06/24/10 05:22 AM.