David,

A lovely opening. Both the piano and the bass sound great.

LOVELOVELOVE the Melody!!!

Sweet harmonies.

A very effective little "drop" for the ending...

I like your chorus. Simple, yet effective.
Not sure Skies Hiding works as an image?

Your work with the voices is nothing short of stunning.

"Show you work". Lucky for us that advice (wherever it might have come from) pays off...

fj