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The Voice Of Splendor

The original idea for the song was conceived three years ago, probably inspired by a bird song that was new to me at that time, but I haven't heard it in years. For a long time, I was just circling the subject, because I didn't want to ruin the song by hurrying. Finally this spring I felt that it was time to finish it. Well, I hope you'll get the mood of hearing/meeting someone special just for a short while.

There is also a bird video for the song, but its mix is older and vocals are too upfront. I hope the new one sounds more balanced, but I'm interested in hearing any kind of opinion on the mix. I used a Carole King song as the reference target for Ozone to get a folk pop feel, but maybe some other genre target would suit the song better...

I used my favorite Weina for the lead vocals. I know that I should have tweaked parameters to make her sound softer in several places, but I'm still learning...

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The bird: Melodyne used to modify Common Rosefinch song

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I remember the morning dew
the awe and rapture
I caught a call from you
I remember the early spring
the icicles melted
when you flew to sing
the blessing of fate
opened the door
for the sweetest voice
I had not heard before.

Singing in my garden
by the maple tree
a captivating melody was
comforting me.
Singing in the shower
on a rainy day
happiness is fleeting
but the memory stays.

I remember the tenth of June
the voice of splendor had
quietened too soon
I remember the empty roost
the genie of craving
spread its wings and loosed
I miss all your past
sweet warblings
they were feathers stroking
my sensitive strings.

Singing in my garden...

From springs to autumns I watch the trees
I whistle your tune
among the chickadees
I regret that I lost your voice
wondering if you had no other choice
I look through the leaves
at lovely lives
wish I'll be prepared
if a new chance arrives.

Some chances never come true
the headwinds or hurdles may bring down your nest
fortune can be just a short trill
I'm grateful for the time when you were my guest.
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Janne,

This is a very pretty piece of music with great lyrics. Your use of Weina and Natalie are superb. If you had not said anything in the notes - I would think they were pro singers.

Excellent production as well - loved it!

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You got that '70s vibe, all right. Very folk and pretty.

Weina is a great match for this style.

The mix feels a bit bright, but it matches the sound of a 45 of the era, so I guess that's authentic. wink

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Nice song, excellent use of Real Tracks, and Synth v. I wouldn't have known it was a Synth voice. Very nice phrasin, very natural. Good mix and production


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Janne,

Great job with the girls. Both lead and harmonies sound good.
The BAND is nicely put together. A great sound.
Excellent mix.

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Good work Janne.
I realised it was a synth voice because it seemed too perfect but not many listeners would.
I tried the Synthesiser V demo but couldn't get it to work on my DAW.

The song is very cleverly put together and an excellent mix.

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Janne, you did a fabulous job with those synth voices!

I really liked your backing band.
On a side note I would have liked the birds a little lower in volume but that is just my opinion.

Great mix!
Two thumbs up!


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Janne

Pretty captivating piece. Nice vocal work on the synth and a very nice melody throughout.

Nicely done.

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Very creative, Janne. Love the melody and how it intertwines with the harmony. Great idea using Melodyne to correct-pitch the finch. smile The band is filled with outstanding choices, and you mixed it all perfectly. I'd keep the birds loud and proud. Afterall, it is their song. wink


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Originally Posted By: rsdean
Janne,

This is a very pretty piece of music with great lyrics. Your use of Weina and Natalie are superb. If you had not said anything in the notes - I would think they were pro singers.

Excellent production as well - loved it!

Bob


Thanks Bob, I appreciate your very kind review smile

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Originally Posted By: dcuny
You got that '70s vibe, all right. Very folk and pretty.

Weina is a great match for this style.

The mix feels a bit bright, but it matches the sound of a 45 of the era, so I guess that's authentic. wink

My word of the day: "quietened".



Thanks David for your positive words smile Glad you liked Weina's voice in this song's style, I didn't think anyone else. I probably couldn't hear the brightness, because I was more focused on taming the bass.

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Originally Posted By: Elliott Kayne
Nice song, excellent use of Real Tracks, and Synth v. I wouldn't have known it was a Synth voice. Very nice phrasin, very natural. Good mix and production


Thanks Elliot for your nice comment smile Pleasure to read your words about the use of Synth V.

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Janne,

Great job with the girls. Both lead and harmonies sound good.
The BAND is nicely put together. A great sound.
Excellent mix.

fj


Thanks Floyd, I appreciate your positive feedback smile Glad you liked also the harmonies, I was wondering whether my bass + countermelody voices combination would work.

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Definitely a late 60/early 70s folk pop vibe in the verses...less so in the chorus. I THINK the 2nd vocal competes with the 1st...not a bad thing if mixed a little lower.
The birds, whilst nice, are intrusive.
A lovely piece of nostalgia pop.


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This is very beautiful Janne!!

A gorgeous arrangement!

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Originally Posted By: vicarn
Good work Janne.
I realised it was a synth voice because it seemed too perfect but not many listeners would.
I tried the Synthesiser V demo but couldn't get it to work on my DAW.

The song is very cleverly put together and an excellent mix.

Vic


Thanks Vic for your positive feedback smile I tried to leave some imperfections in timing (from the original midi melody I had played), but I guess too many imperfections would distract also.

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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Janne, you did a fabulous job with those synth voices!

I really liked your backing band.
On a side note I would have liked the birds a little lower in volume but that is just my opinion.

Great mix!
Two thumbs up!


Thanks Mario for thumbs and kind comment smile I agree with the lowering the birds, I already did that several times during the mixing process, but maybe not enough. And besides, they hide the most beautiful chord progression wink

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Janne,
Fun tune and idea! Complex, yet well absorbed structure. Balance seems good to my ears. Clear mix. Amazing, how realistic synth voice sounds. Good one, and thank you for sharing.
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Being listeners of bird songs in our woods daily we love and can relate to the lyric.

Weina and Natalie both sound lovely and are a perfect match for the mood. You nailed the feel of a Carole King song vibe.

The wrens always build nests in our hanging fern baskets and Janice enjoys looking in on the babies. You’ve captured the joy very well!

The excellent lyric, melody, track choice and mix all make for a wonderful and enjoyable production.

Lovely song and sweet video!

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Originally Posted By: PeterF
Janne

Pretty captivating piece. Nice vocal work on the synth and a very nice melody throughout.

Nicely done.

Peter


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