Hi, floyd jane.

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
A lovely opening. Both the piano and the bass sound great.

LOVELOVELOVE the Melody!!!

Sweet harmonies.

A very effective little "drop" for the ending...

I like your chorus. Simple, yet effective.

Thanks! blush

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Not sure Skies Hiding works as an image?

I guess I'm going to prove you right by explaining it. wink

It's an elision of these two thoughts:

   I can't find my blue skies, they're hidden behind grey clouds
   I can't find you, where are you hiding?

I figured I'd fix it later, but never did, partly because I liked the inner rhyme of skies/hide and didn't want to lose it.

Maybe something like this would work...

   blue skies
   where are my blue skies?
   now they all hide
   behind grey clouds
   since you've been gone


I'll see what I can do. smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?