Originally Posted By: rayc
Lovely song, lovely vocal performance and lovely arrangement.
I think the solo could be EQ mellowed just a little but it's probably my cruddy ears.
Every "break" in the voice is a break in a heart.


Thanks, ray. I get the mellow thought. I went with the original tone from the RT thinking it provided some contrast (the the most mellow arrangement/tracks)


Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Dang, man, you write instant classics --often anthems, in fact, no matter who your writing partner is. Another gorgeous write with a pro production. Do you have any songs you wrote when you were four, Floyd? If so, please send it to me. I need a lower bar. wink


smile
I wrote my first song at 14, so nothing from 4.
It was pretty bad. Typical beginner's generic/cliched lyrics. But, oh!, what a melody!!! smile smile smile


Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI
Man, Floyd, you are one high-quality, prolific writer/artist! Another top-shelfer.

Dewey


Much appreciated, Dewey....


Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Floyd ...

I know Mike slightly from the other music site we once belonged to at the same time. and yes, he's an excellent lyricist.

As I listened, Ed Bruce kept running through my mind. He's the only person I can think of who might have sung this as good as you do. I nearly cried when he died a few years back. He was always one of my favorites for many years. But you leave me with many of the pleasures I enjoyed when listening to him. I think that's a very fitting analogy.

A small suggestion, FWIW:


yea, there's some *age* in my eyes - yeah, got some *years* in my eyes


Just a very small, probably insignificant thing, but it crossed my mind. But, there's not a thing wrong with it as written. Feel free to ignore.

This is another stellar song. I miss this style of music. Thanks for continuing to give it life.

Alan



Thanks, Alan. Ed was a great one! for sure...
Thanks for the suggestion (I prefer "age", though)

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