Def the case that the vocal sounds like it is coming from on high & it's a bit loud - the Spaghetti baritone guitar should be at about the same level as the vocal too.
A little de-essing would also be useful.
I recommend you kill the reverb in BIAB and add your own - preferably the same as the one on the vocal though not as much.
From a lyrical standpoint I'd offer that outside of a christian audience the narrative makes no sense.
Cool voice.

Cheers
rayc
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