Interesting song.

FYI: you can get feedback on the guitar with a modeling amp...you should have let it go a bit further.... it was kinda just peeking out there like the blue top peekaboo.

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Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.