I like it. Really cool song. I tend to agree with Floyd and the others on this regarding the style. Everything is really well done and I kinda liked that island groove but I think it's kinda off base for the song and it's topic. Nothing in the lyric alluded to reggae or island life. That's the only disconnect I felt as I listened.

I really like that title and how well you wrote the lyrics to fit nicely.

Well done.

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 08/02/23 05:23 AM.

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