Originally Posted By: Dewey_MI

My intent was to make it sound like a love song but, twisted from guy-gal to hunter-deer.


And you did a fine job of that. Obvious enough in a moment.

Nice production and sung well. Good mix.

The chorus has some good "catchy" to it.
The melody is "almost too good", belying the novelty aspect. A more rudimentary basic-3-chord Country melody might give it more of a novelty feel, but that is just an off-the-cuff comment. (it is a very nice melody)

It's fun and well done.

fj