That's a very abrupt & jarring beginning.
I think you need to do some manual editing of the noise that's in that intro instrument (bagpipes?) and there's a a lot of string noise in the RT acoustic - in fact it may be the noise at the beginning but it sounds a little too glitchy for that.
The sax sounds fine but, as usual, I simply wanted it to be done so that I'd hear YOU.
When your playing is the feature the thing comes to life.

Cheers
rayc
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