Nice song!

The only problem I have with "you're left" instead of "you've left" is that it feels like you're trying to stretch the term to include the political meaning. But there's nothing in the lyric to support that reading, so it just sounds - to my small and pedantic mind - like you're saying it wrong.

Now if you had sung:

   There were parties at your house
   Sometimes red and sometimes blue...


wink

But as long as you're happy with the lyric... carry on! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?