Nice write. I liked how the delayed drum came in and added punch to the chorus. Subtle harmonies.

Guitar before the second verse did its job. "Cyberspace"... haven't heard that in a while.

Guitar after the second chorus does nice build into the bridge and gives an even bigger lift to the final verse.

Crunchy chords. Piano fills in the background just right.

Of course, the vocals are perfect.

Nice mix, too. Textbook perfect! laugh

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?