Originally Posted By: dcuny
Nice write. I liked how the delayed drum came in and added punch to the chorus. Subtle harmonies.

Guitar before the second verse did its job. "Cyberspace"... haven't heard that in a while.

Guitar after the second chorus does nice build into the bridge and gives an even bigger lift to the final verse.

Crunchy chords. Piano fills in the background just right.

Of course, the vocals are perfect.

Nice mix, too. Textbook perfect! laugh


Thanks, David. That was my reaction to "cyberspace" when Bill sent me the original lyric - and that was 10 years ago. I considered changing it, but after a while became accustom to it.



Originally Posted By: rayc
'it's just a few more days 'til you're home again
i pray my heart can hold out 'til then..."
That relieves the aching empathy a little bit.
Your voice & the way you use it are the winning elements in this but the lyrics melody and arrangement asre terrific.


Thanks, ray. Appreciate the comment on the vocals, for sure. The quoted lines are all Bill. He is an excellent writer. My job there was to find a melody that would match the sentiment and provide added buildup/power/release... Hopefully, that all worked...

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