Hi, B.D.
I didn't like the original version because of the snare, but your final mix sounds good to me.
Cool.
It's strange how a single element can shape our feelings about something.
Lyrics and vocals have the expected quality

and I enjoyed the listen.
When Natalie sings for you, she always has a nice Karen Carpenter touch
Thanks! That's the main reason I choose Natalie - she's got "that" sound.
My only criticism is that while I would classify the song in the "easy listening" genre, it's a bit too "easy" for me, as it doesn't have a distinct chorus (lyrically it does, but there's no dynamics or other variety).
Noted, I'll see what I can do in the future.
Thanks for stopping by to post.
