updated the mix

https://soundcloud.com/joseph-stroffolino/heaven-9-1-23-master?si=05d3d0f7c56749bd8e56a123b883f2b7&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

This is a song I wrote called "Heaven". My intention is for the song to be funny but it's a fine line between funny and preachy.

Hoping to get some feedback on the overall song and the mix levels.
Thanks for checking it out.
Joe


Recorded using Logic Pro and mastered with Isotope Ozone
RealTracks in song: ~618:Fiddle, Background Allis Ev 120
RealTracks in style: ~522:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 120
RealTracks in style: ~405:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 120
Drums: EZ drummer 3
Keyboard: EZ keys 2 using EZ keys for 1 track and scalar 2 for a second track.
Bass: EZ bass

Lyrics:
I hope that heaven is a place where everyone can share the same space​
And liberals and conservatives can exist in perfect harmony​
Cause if you live a good life and you seal the deal​
and you end up in heaven how are you going to feel​
If when you get there there’s people who want to argue​
with you about politics
***
Why can’t we just all get along​
Why can’t we live and let be​
Why can’t we just all mind our own business​
And agree to disagree
***
Will you let it go or will you keep on fighting even after your first Saint Peter sighting​
Or will you check the TV to see if there’s CNN or Fox News in Heaven​
They had to pry your gun from your cold dead hand but now that you’re a soul in a spiritual land​
Will you still demand your second amendment rights to protect yourself in heaven​
***
I hope that in in heaven you can eat real steak with a bunch of vegans eating meat that’s fake​
As you pose for a photo with Jesus trying to re-enact that painting of the last supper.​
If you bump into that undocumented guy who you sent back to his country will you look him in the eye.​
will you tell he’s not welcome in the United States part of heaven?
***
All these people with extreme positions shouting to their hearts content​
Like demented performance artists in a circus tent​
They can try to push our buttons be we don’t have to let them​
They can invite us to their party but we don’t have to show up.​
***
Why can’t we just all get along​
Why can’t we live and let be​
Why can’t we just all mind our own business​
And agree to disagree
***
Why can’t we just all get along​
Why can’t we live and let be​
Why can’t we just all mind our own business​
And agree to disagree
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