Hi James,

I'm not quite sure what to say about this song. I liked the way the lyrics developed in the first three verses but, after that, the song became a little too sad for me to enjoy. One thing I noticed, though, is that your production and presentation are getting noticeably stronger with each song you post. It is clear that you are developing some good skills in this area.

All the best,
Noel


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