Yes, it is a very sad song. I’m in Trax’s camp here, very good song structure and backing tracks. Super job on that.

IMHO, and others may differ, I thought that an instrumental verse between each two vocal verses was a tad too much. I might cut those down to maybe only two measures of instrumental before the next verse. The two verse instrumental lead in the middle of the song is fine. Again that is just my opinion.

I really did enjoy this song. Great job on the mix, backing tracks and vocals.


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