It's not likely it needs my ears, Ray. They're too biased; they already like what you do before I push play.

I really dig the lyrics with the numerical progression. Very clever. Work In Progress is actually a good title. The Bard's question is good too: To Be Or Not To Be.

Now, to the song... I like the progression at its lethargic pace. With Allison in the mix, you really can't go wrong. Good dynamics. I see no bass listed. Is that you? Either way I like it. Well, I gave it a couple spins and I still like it. As good as it is, I know you're gonna make it even better, and I'll be looking forward to the progress.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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