For a first version, your W.I.P. is already quite mature.
LOVE the lyrics, even when you think they are not that great.

Since "Is This Real" is a bit too cliché, I suggest "Is This the Total Deal" as the song title.
As a listener I would be curious to listen to a song with that title.

The vocals could use a little more sparkle, right now they're a bit dull and don't cut through well.

One more suggestion: the chorus already has a nice Pink Floyd vibe, maybe this direction could be explored further (organ a bit louder, maybe one of those BIAB gospel choirs in the background, you get the idea).