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Nice Swampy beginning.
Then had to immediately look to see what Drums you used. LOVE 'em!!
Alison's vocals are Superb. Perfectly processed. Just the right amount of questioning emotion.
And...at the PERFECT level. Weaving amongst the tracks. No lyric sheet required.
Bass is JUST right.
Guitars are JUST right. Peaking through at all the right places.
Yes, I wanted to organ louder.
The nylon lead was a surprise. A really Good one.
I was underwhelmed by the horns. They are nicely done - for what they are - but...for me, they seemed slightly out-of-place (and if they are stopping the organ from having its full voice.... well....)

"Four steps
Forewords
Forethought
Foresee
Forewarned
Fourth time (for me to be or not to be)
For t'was not to be"

LOVE this write. Truly "clever" without hitting-you-over-the-head with Clever.

This is very close right outta the chute.
One of your best! Hitting on all (or most) cylinders.

fj