Interesting narrative...blending Tolkien with climate...is to be applauded.
I'm sure J.R.R. would've been horrified at the result of modern convenience.

The lead in the intro, solo & outro sounds good, and is well developed but doesn't seem to quite sit...maybe too loud, maybe in need of a common reverb - I'm not sure.

My ears twitched at the pronunciation of "Lorien"...it shouldn't have stood out but seems "foreign" given the version my mind settled with in the mid 70s.
"...we all glide..." had me think of "...we all float down here..." silly of my mind but that's where it went.

I listened rather than watched...I'm still trying to get my head around the staggered semi-morphing and inclination to anime style images that current A.I. videos seems to build from.

Last edited by rayc; 09/14/23 05:11 PM.

Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe