Hi Ellioth,

To start with your words above my post: I don't agree that there is a separation between you as a composer and as a singer.
You do very well on both parts!
A lovely song and a very nice voice.
Ah, there was some tension on the higher parts, like Ray and others wrote, but I'm sure you will fix that.
But the main thing is that it's a very lovely song!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130