Hi Rog,

Intriguing song and nice lyrics
Like your vocals and those of the BG.
Lot of things happen in the song.
Sometimes I thought to hear something like 'Come together' from the Beatles, but then it changes in to somethiong else.
With your vocals you do the same.
I enjoyed that a lot!

So your song is very attractive, but I agree with Ray on that metaphoric thing.
Beside that I wasn't so fond of the sound of the snare drum at the start. A bit hollow (is that the right word?).
But great stuff!

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130