Hi Robert,

Very nice song and very good use of that AI vocals.
And about the mood you tried to achieve, I think you succeeded on that!
Yes I do like this song, the lyrics and those vocals.

I noticed some minor things I want to inform you about.
At the start of the song the vocals were to far away, but only for some words.
The vocals are good, but I miss a bit of emotion in it.
I think some variation in the volume of the vocals can achieve that a bit more.

But a huge compliment from me for the result I heard here already.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130