David, only you can make these songs and lyrics.
What I read is that a lot of people in this forum think the same thing.

In a way, in your songs I always hear a young Bob Dylan, although you are much better (I think ;-)), and younger?

If I would try to sing all these words in that fast tempo of yours, I know I'd end up in the hospital with a broken tongue and a destroyed throat.
Ah, that last one has already happened, but not yet the tongue.

I enjoyed the song a lot. Typically a Snyder song, good and funny, with lots of energy and sharp lyrics.
But I ran out of compliments now...

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
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