Originally Posted By: dcuny
Pleasant bed, but like Hans I started thinking "It's not over yet?" about halfway through. wink

The parts all work, but to keep my squirrel-sized brain engaged in an instrumental longer than two minutes, it needs to have a bit more direction.

But add a vocal and a funky bass to it, and I'll be with you all the way!

So sorry it didn't keep your brain engaged David. Not really sure what you mean by "it needs to have a bit more direction". There's an intro, chorus, verse, key change and outro.

As for adding a funky bass, that may take much more study. I've been playing bass now for not yet 8 years; writing songs for less than half of that; still a youngster, I know. But I appreciate your comments.


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