You want to be "discovered" but post two songs that are years old and quite a way from being ready.
Work for your dream. Work on the songs. Work on the mix.
Folk here will assist with commentary, suggestions and advice but can only do so from a posityion of knowledge.
What BIAB product did you use?
What RTs or other stuff did you build your song with?
What DAW are you using?
Is English a language you used daily?
Based on what I've heard you need to work on your vocal capture as well as your diction, (jeapody is pronounced "jep O dee"), and song structure - the Mona/manic one has too long an intro for example.
Give us the info needed to help.

Cheers
rayc
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