A intriguing song with beautiful lyrics!
The band was really nice and, although you did something with the pich of your vocals, your voice is still very recognizable.
I like that very much.
There is one but: when you sing at your lowest, the vocals became to soft. Perhaps you can turn up the volume so that what you are singing is audible?
But as I said, I liked the melody, your vocals and the lyrics a lot!
So, very well done!
Hans
Thanks Hans for your heartwarming comment

I'm glad you liked the lyrics. And surprised you thought it was me singing... I won't spoil that thought with the truth

It is always difficult to mix low vocals, because those low notes are usually not that good quality so increasing their volume may bring up noise etc.
Janne