Hi David,
I was listening to other songs just now, trying to catch up, when I noticed your post.
So this has to be my fastest answer ever!
I think you are right on the muddy pieces and the vocals, especially the s-sounds.
I don't thinkl it is muddyness, but my struggle with the drum stems and Ozone 11. I just had it, but where I thought it would ease my life I was wrong.
And for the vocals I think I might have used a bit too much reverb and delay.
Thanks,
Hans,
This is a great rock song.
A very techno Imagine Dragons/U2/Muse sound for you, but it is hot man. Nice work on the vox.
The mix may have been a little muddy in places and the vox could be a little clearer (I think, it could be my speakers) but overall it is great rock and roll.)
Good job!