David,

A beautiful Write. A real Love Song. With Heart.
(and Then it becomes an anthem). Another level.
A Passionate Vocal.
Your Wall of Guitars is really well done (including the melodic ones).
Good Mix. Except for the Drums. They are weak. They should be Strong in this.

It would great to hear a big choir singing along on that last chorus.

I Really, Really, Really like this (except for the drums).

fj