Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I would work a bit more on the prosody, at the moment the vocals are a bit too mechanical. [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]

Yes, I totally agree, its way too mechanical. With Synthesizer V you would have to spend a lot of time to tweak the expression with pitch curves to make it sound human. This was just the direct output with no work, I just played the melody and typed in the words. It's good for songwriting to just hear the melody, but not good enough for a real track or demo without work.