How cool!! (The intro will have Janice imitating Hal from 2001 for days. ;))

We’re both sci-fi fans and in this song y’all are certainly a dynamic duo in our opinion.

The alternating vocals work great.

Your synth and bass are excellent and the BiaB drums cut though the mix (in the good way) in the tweaked version.

We much like the progression of the lyric in each verse.

A most cool lyric! We much liked the bridge and also the line,
“Best to have all the relevant facts before one acts…”

Awesome!

J&B

PS Bud suggests to forget Ozone presets and build your own chain with the Ozone modules. And each module has its own group of presets. Gotta get very lucky to just grab an overall Ozone preset that works for your song. And either Ozone’s multi-band compressor or Dynamic EQ can really open up a mix - and avoid the drum issue. FWIW, IMHO, etc.

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