Originally Posted by musician17
A very Carlos Santana-like song - complete with the guitar from Dave Bell himself smile . He nails his part ... you, Marty, nail yours. You are a storyteller, and (obviously) a brilliant one. And the lyrics make for a beautiful, beautiful story to tell. All these elements come together wonderfully - well done.
Thanks so much, James. I must be a good story teller to tell of all my life failures, and still make it seem beautiful. smile My guess is Dave's additions help sway the storyline.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
Cool, groovy, a great song all around, lyrics, music, production, everything. Can say no more! Brilliant.
Thanks, Chay. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for saying so.

Originally Posted by Guitarhacker
Great job. Tasty blues licks and a great topic as well.

You can't dwell on what should have been or what you could have done. It'll drive you crazy. All you can do is carry on, try harder the next time, and write a song about it.
HA, great advice, Herb. Thanks. Yep Dave's first real name is Blue.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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