Hi Bob,
I just listened to your song, here's my feedback.

Technical feedback:
  • Interesting combination of Realtracks. I didn't expect these synthesizers to go with the guitars, but they certainly do. Good job
  • Good production, wide and open mix


Artistic feedback:
  • Interesting and a bit mystic lyrics. I like that a lot
  • The choice of instruments and the way you arranged them support the song perfectly. Well done!