Deej,
funky stuff! Stop complaining, you are a very good at composing & singing! I mean it. This tune is perfect example that you can change a direction. To my ears it is whole/complete and sounds really good. I have miles to walk before I can do something similar. Enjoyed this tune and thank you for sharing.

Misha.

P.S. Most of tunes I do are sketches, they are almost never complete and don't sound like a "well produced" items at all smile To me personally, an idea is more important than the end product. Hearing your tunes through my prism of values, I find that you have a lot of great musical ideas plus excellent voice. Most of your tunes sound great. If you want, PM me, I will share a contact of one very affordable and knowledgeable sound guy with excellent reputation. He is mainly a mastering guy, but he can pinpoint production errors or weak spots in production very well. I used him couple of times and was happy with his advise.