That's actually pretty close to the original. Maybe a little bit too close actually. It seems to stay on the main theme and never gives a reprise like I heard in Craig's tune. Honestly, I skipped through both in 10 second jumps.

The funk is peeking through however. You have the potential for a pretty decent tune if you give it a variation from the main theme that keeps the listeners engaged.


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