Hi, Dan.

I had a listen to both songs.

Craig's piece is the in the pocket.

Your version doesn't seem to feel the beats 2 and 4 the same. When the keys hit those beats, the other instruments don't. So it feels like there's always someone who's not got the funky feel.

There's good stuff there, but - for me - it just doesn't seem to gel. Too many people trying to take the lead instead of holding down the groove together.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?