Hi, James.

I agree with the others - nice write, and it sounds good with the backing.

But... just to be super nit-picky here...

   Your skin so soft, like alabaster,

I assume you mean "lthe color of alabaster". Because when I hear "soft, like alabster", I was confused.

Anyway, nice work! smile


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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?