Originally Posted by rayc
I enjoyed everything but two lines...
"My little brother from another mother"
&
"Your sister from another mister ".
Those lines took my brain away from the narrative and music to a place where i self debated the use of them.
Probably just a thing I do - sorry.
fab arrangement, good general narrative and well mixed.
Natalie was very well done.
Hmh ... actually the whole purpose of the lyrics was to get those 2 phrases into one song because I like them so much smile
But I get what you mean, my brain does that sometimes too.
Glad you liked the rest of the song.

Thanks Ray for listening and your feedback, as always much appreciated!